What have I done to improve my blog? 20th November 2015

Post blog review amendments

As in my last post, I identified that I needed to increase my use of ICT on my blog. Below are some of the few examples of when I used a more unique version of ICT and the blog this was done on.

• Prezi used on my blog which was an analysis of the opening to Leon: The Professional
• Prezi used on my blog which was the screenplay and script for my film opening
• Slideshare on my blog about the character elements of the police officer in my film opening
• Slideshare used on my blog about considering representing Disability in film opening
• Addition of mp3 file on my blog about music and sound in my film opening
• Links to Youtube clips on my blog about sound in Thrillers
• Bubbl.us used in blog about coursework brief and initial ideas
• Bubbl.us used in blog about choosing a genre and the conventions of that genre- Thriller
• Spicynodes used on my blog about actors and character elements for film opening
• Spicynodes used on my blog for script and screenplay for film opening

I have also added more detail to my blog about actors and character as well as adding more detail to my blog about props, costumes and hidden secrets.

What is lacking from my blog? 18th November 2015

Self Blog Review

After peer and self reviewing my blog, I was told that this blog has few errors/problems apart from a few details about the actors and costume. I agree with this and will include more detail to clarify how these are applicable with my genre of Thriller and the film opening that I am creating. I also feel that I need to clarify how I would like the audience to respond to my film opening.

I have been given 15/20 marks which is the top of the third band of marks. The main reason that I am limited on gaining more marks is because I am lacking in my use of ICT including: prezi/slideshare/spicy nodes even though I have already used prezi once for my screenplay. I will now be sure to increase my use of ICT and change some past blogs so that they are presented in different ways.

Dated: 18th November 2015