This post details the changes made to my film opening that differ from the original storyboard and script. These changes have been made for multiple reasons such as: the capability to film shots, the message created by the shot and the way in which the original shot did not fit into the narrative that was originally intended.
A1- Changed to audio sourced off of Youtube.
A2 to A12- Changed to just one line of dialogue from the caller and then a hang up dial tone.
B1- Change from wide shot to a closer medium shot.
B4- Change to a black screen with the sound of getting into the car to create the need for inference by the audience.
C1- Change to a low angle shot looking up at the house as the car arrives and obscures the camera
C2- Change to a shot of a newspaper
C3- Change to man reading newspaper
C4- Change to exterior shot of doorway where the man has his gun drawn and is turning corner
C5- Change to interior shot of man lowering gun
C6- Change to POV of officer lowering his body and reaching his hand out.
C7- Change to little girl standing on stick
C8- Change to man turning around and shooting gun
C9- Change to cut to black
C10- Removed from this scene
C11- Removed from this scene
DI1- Change to man approaching camera with his gun drawn.
DI2- Dead girl laying on the ground.
DI3- Kept wide shot of door but not of it closing
DI4- Change to a close up of the door
DI6- Removed
DS3- Changed where man does not sit back in his seat but just has his hand on his face
DS6- Split between two shots of the cigarette
DS15- Changed to a tighter shot of the wife being punched and then added an extra shot of the wife falling down.
DS16- "he's sound" lyrics were changed to a hand around the woman's neck, Then, the rest of the lyrics show the man punching towards the screen.
DS17- Changed to hand dropping on ground and blood platter and blood dropping in water.
DS18- Draw opened and gun taken out.
DS19- Split between original shot of camera behind man and then a shot from infront of the gun in the man's hand.
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