This post details the changes made to my film opening that differ from the original storyboard and script. These changes have been made for multiple reasons such as: the capability to film shots, the message created by the shot and the way in which the original shot did not fit into the narrative that was originally intended.
A1- Changed to audio sourced off of Youtube.
A2 to A12- Changed to just one line of dialogue from the caller and then a hang up dial tone.
B1- Change from wide shot to a closer medium shot.
B4- Change to a black screen with the sound of getting into the car to create the need for inference by the audience.
C1- Change to a low angle shot looking up at the house as the car arrives and obscures the camera
C2- Change to a shot of a newspaper
C3- Change to man reading newspaper
C4- Change to exterior shot of doorway where the man has his gun drawn and is turning corner
C5- Change to interior shot of man lowering gun
C6- Change to POV of officer lowering his body and reaching his hand out.
C7- Change to little girl standing on stick
C8- Change to man turning around and shooting gun
C9- Change to cut to black
C10- Removed from this scene
C11- Removed from this scene
DI1- Change to man approaching camera with his gun drawn.
DI2- Dead girl laying on the ground.
DI3- Kept wide shot of door but not of it closing
DI4- Change to a close up of the door
DI6- Removed
DS3- Changed where man does not sit back in his seat but just has his hand on his face
DS6- Split between two shots of the cigarette
DS15- Changed to a tighter shot of the wife being punched and then added an extra shot of the wife falling down.
DS16- "he's sound" lyrics were changed to a hand around the woman's neck, Then, the rest of the lyrics show the man punching towards the screen.
DS17- Changed to hand dropping on ground and blood platter and blood dropping in water.
DS18- Draw opened and gun taken out.
DS19- Split between original shot of camera behind man and then a shot from infront of the gun in the man's hand.
Welcome to Samuel Pilsworth's Media blog for film, genre of Thriller. Please be advised that some of the blog posts contain spoilers or discussions for the following movies: Psycho(1960),The Shining(1980),Léon: The Professional(1994),Heat(1995),Seven(1995),Fight Club(1999),The Sixth Sense(1999),Memento(2000),Panic Room(2002),S.W.A.T(2003),Lord of War(2005),No Country for Old Men(2007),The Dark Knight(2008),Shutter Island(2010),The Woman in Black(2012) and The Dark Knight Rises(2012)
Wednesday, 23 December 2015
Thursday, 17 December 2015
Filming report dated 17th December 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film on the 17th December 2015
During this final filming period, there were two parts of filming that had to be done. The first was the blood splatter after the punch and the other was audio for the 911 call where the dialogue and structure of the 911 call was changed.
DS17
This shot was based mainly on experiments to get the perfect shot. I setup a white background and positioned the glass of water in front of it. Using red food colouring, I dropped one drop into the glass. The after affect created by this was extremely effective and looked perfect. I then experimented with a syringe and received similar effects on my second and third takes. On my fourth take, I decided to instead use a larger quantity of food coloring in the glass and received unexpected results. The immediate effect was far better than the previous takes but with worse after affects as the colouring rose instead of fall like the previous takes. I decided to use this take as I needed a short take that didn't matter after the rest of the shot as i would cut to another shot. This shot is the only shot that is a symbolic and 'non-existent' shot that uses a metaphor instead of a literal meaning.A1-A12 (Scene A)
A1
These lines of dialogue (and overall scene) proved to be very difficult to achieve. The main issue being that my actress was unable to make the 911 operator seem realistic enough. This was because of a lack of training on how to restrain themselves to raise the pitch of their voice in A1 as it is natural to do so when asking a question. Because the actress was doing this, it made the line seem unrealistic and unprofessional for a 911 operator to speak in this way. This problem resulted in me swapping roles with the actress to act as a 911 operator. However, I was also unable to make my voice seem realistic for a 911 operator. After many bloopers, I decided that the dialogue for the 911 operator was not possible to achieve based on my available resources. I started to instead attempt to source a recording using secondary sources off YouTube of real 911 operator recordings. Still, I struggled to find any usable audio until I found some raw generic radio chatter audio on Youtube that I had to sort through and find the audio that I wanted. I converted this audio into an mp3 file and then edited it into the film opening.
For the next line of dialogue, I needed audio from the caller who is in peril. As stated above, I had a large collection of bloopers made by trying to record the last line of dialogue. I decided to try to record the audio using the same actress again but as the caller. I again had difficulties getting the correct take that I wanted and tried varying accents with the actress to extreme stereotypes like strong Southern American and Scottish. This created some unique takes that were more comedic than usable in my opening. However, after recording a few Scottish takes; the actress almost accidentally produced the exact take that I wanted with the perfect audio that fitted the tone that I wanted for the opening. This take was produced out of the blue and using extreme accents seemed to have helped the actress to produce the take that I wanted. My response of shock can be heard at the end of the above video of the audio from the bloopers.
I decided to instead just use these two lines of dialogue and then a hang up dial tone for the film opening as I preferred the tone that it created for the opening and it matched what was achievable.
Wednesday, 9 December 2015
Filming report dated 9th December 2015
For this shot, I used a fake cigarette and used matches to burn the end and create the illusion of this prop being a real cigarette being smoked. Instead of planning how each take would precisely look, I just filmed a large quantity of raw footage holding the cigarette in different positions and then choose which part I preferred. I had issues with the cigarette itself as the instructions on the packet specifically said to not burn the cigarettes. This warning proved to be reliable as I realised after setting the cigarette alight, that the cigarette was filled with some form of cotton wool. The outer part of the cigarette was made up of card which burnt much slower than the interior cotton wool. Smoke can be seen leaving the other end of the cigarette in some of the raw footage which meant that I had to hide the back end of the cigarette out of the shot.
Tuesday, 8 December 2015
Filming report dated 8th December 2015
I found that this shot was quite easy to shoot. However, there was a struggle to place the cigarette in the mouth properly on the first two takes but then did this successfully on the third take.
DS16
This shot was very problematic as it was difficult to gauge where the actor should place his foot when kicking and also for how long to hold his foot over the camera after kicking. The actor also struggled with keeping stable with kicking and having enough room to extend his leg in a way that made his kick look realistic enough.
DS15 Punching body against door+ punching fist shot
For this shot, I positioned myself against a door and had the actor simulate punching me in the side. As you cannot see my face, the present character is actually the officer's wife. The actor recommended punching towards my right side so that it looked more realistic as no contact can be seen being made between the fist and body.
For the punching shot, the actor punched across the screen which gave an almost streamlined feeling to his actions and only took one take.
DS19
For this shot, I aimed the camera behind the actor so that his gun could be seen as it is drawn. The light from in front could be seen in between the actor's left arm which I was happy about. I tried a second take where the light could be seen in between both arms but I felt that this was not as good as the first take.
Sunday, 6 December 2015
Filming report dated 6th December 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film on the 6th December 2015
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming.
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming.
DS9
I found that this shot was quite difficult to film as I had to find a substitute for cocaine to film with. After looking online for different alternatives, I came across a website with the recommendation of baking powder. I ended up using baking powder after doing this research and trialling with flour as its consistency lacked the realistic consistency of cocaine based on its heavy density as well as other factors. I filmed three takes of this shot and used a vacuum cleaner to simulate the cocaine being snorted. Acting as a buffer, I used a dollar bill that was rolled up to hide the fact that a vacuum was used. Because the audio over the shot is music, it does not matter that a loud machine can be heard over the raw footage.
DS18
This shot was a change from the original shot as the original looked unrealistic and set up in a way that did not seem authentic. I filmed a shot of the draw being closed (to be put in the intro of the song) and a shot to replace shot DS18 of the draw being opened and the gun being taken out. The only issue that I found was that my shadow could be seen over the wood in some of the takes but finally was happy with the the that I chose to use for the final project as the shadow does not distract from the message that I wanted to create in this shot.
Wednesday, 25 November 2015
Filming report dated 25th November 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film of 25th November 2015.
Below is my introduction clarifying details.
For this shoot, I filmed a large quantity of my shots that were a spread between Scenes B,C and D. However, most of these shots were in Scene B where the officer is outside the building and ends up shooting the little girl. I still have more shots to cover but feel that after editing these shots together, I will have a clearer perspective of how much time I have currently filled of my two minute limit. Depending on this length, I will be able to gague if Scene A will fit within this limit and if the scene is necessary or requires to be shortened. At this time, I feel that Scene A will most likely require some shortening.
At this point, I have filmed 21 shots which works out to just under half of all my required shots. Seeing that I have two more weeks to film (and have taken about the same time to film this half), I feel confident that I will be able to finish my shoot on time.
I have not uploaded the raw footage for each shot and instead am using this post to address the existence of the shots that were not detailed or addressed in other filming reports.
Below is my introduction clarifying details.
For this shoot, I filmed a large quantity of my shots that were a spread between Scenes B,C and D. However, most of these shots were in Scene B where the officer is outside the building and ends up shooting the little girl. I still have more shots to cover but feel that after editing these shots together, I will have a clearer perspective of how much time I have currently filled of my two minute limit. Depending on this length, I will be able to gague if Scene A will fit within this limit and if the scene is necessary or requires to be shortened. At this time, I feel that Scene A will most likely require some shortening.
At this point, I have filmed 21 shots which works out to just under half of all my required shots. Seeing that I have two more weeks to film (and have taken about the same time to film this half), I feel confident that I will be able to finish my shoot on time.
I have not uploaded the raw footage for each shot and instead am using this post to address the existence of the shots that were not detailed or addressed in other filming reports.
Tuesday, 24 November 2015
Filming report dated 24th November 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film of 24th November 2015
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming.
I found that shot B5 was quite easy to achieve apart from finding an appropriate angle to shoot at and keeping the keys in the center of the frame. At first, I was concerned that the shot would be too long but found that it fit into the opening perfectly.
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming.
B5
I found that shot B5 was quite easy to achieve apart from finding an appropriate angle to shoot at and keeping the keys in the center of the frame. At first, I was concerned that the shot would be too long but found that it fit into the opening perfectly.
B6
I found that shot B6 had issues with being able to see the reflection of the camera in the dial screen. I had to manoeuvre the camera to an angle that stopped this reflection from being visible. I also had to make a decision of to change the shot from a speedometer to the on screen lights as they not only provided better lighting, but also stood out more in the shot. I then had to choose which of the lights on the dashboard that I should use and which lights fitted into the frame best.
B7
I found that shot B7 was not as possible as I planned. I found that setting up a camera at the back of the car caused an issue with lighting and that a darker shot was required. I ended up using the interior light of the car door that turned off when the door was shut. With the shot, I had problems with the light not turning off when I shut the door as I had not closed it properly and also framing issues. Finally, I was able to solve these problems by opening the door further which ensured that the light shut off and that I had time to re-position the camera.
B8
I found that shot B8 did not match my envisioned shot as the radio did not have a dial to turn to increase the volume. I tried to create the illusion that I was turning a dial but found that this did not look realistic enough. I ended up choosing to just press on the volume buttons to get the shot.
Sunday, 22 November 2015
Filming report dated on 22nd November 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film of 22th November 2015.
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming.
DS5
I found that shot DS5 was somewhat difficult to shoot as I had trouble sourcing a zippo lighter and instead had to revert to a cheaper red lighter instead of the more expensive and branded zippo lighter with a lid. I had never used a zippo lighter before and firstly struggled with getting a flame to appear without moving outside of the shot. I took 3 takes and chose to use the above take which is the second take.
At this point, I have completed 5 shots and have begun to place the shots in the corresponding order on a project using the program Pinnacle.
Friday, 20 November 2015
What have I done to improve my blog? 20th November 2015
Post blog review amendments
As in my last post, I identified that I needed to increase my use of ICT on my blog. Below are some of the few examples of when I used a more unique version of ICT and the blog this was done on.
- Prezi used on my blog which was an analysis of the opening to Leon: The Professional
- Prezi used on my blog which was the screenplay and script for my film opening
- Slideshare on my blog about the character elements of the police officer in my film opening
- Slideshare used on my blog about considering representing Disability in film opening
- Addition of mp3 file on my blog about music and sound in my film opening
- Links to Youtube clips on my blog about sound in Thrillers
- Bubbl.us used in blog about coursework brief and initial ideas
- Bubbl.us used in blog about choosing a genre and the conventions of that genre- Thriller
- Spicynodes used on my blog about actors and character elements for film opening
- Spicynodes used on my blog for script and screenplay for film opening
I have also added more detail to my blog about actors and character as well as adding more detail to my blog about props, costumes and hidden secrets.
Wednesday, 18 November 2015
What is lacking from my blog? 18th November 2015
Self Blog Review
After peer and self reviewing my blog, I was told that this blog has few errors/problems apart from a few details about the actors and costume. I agree with this and will include more detail to clarify how these are applicable with my genre of Thriller and the film opening that I am creating. I also feel that I need to clarify how I would like the audience to respond to my film opening.
I have been given 15/20 marks which is the top of the third band of marks. The main reason that I am limited on gaining more marks is because I am lacking in my use of ICT including: prezi/slideshare/spicy nodes even though I have already used prezi once for my screenplay. I will now be sure to increase my use of ICT and change some past blogs so that they are presented in different ways.
Dated: 18th November 2015
Wednesday, 11 November 2015
Filming report dated 11th November 2015
Below is the schedule that I used to film of 11th November 2015.
Below is the raw footage acquired from filming and my report on each one as well as an introduction clarifying details.
I shot in the order of: DS18,DS8,DS11. This was because I shot the first two shots on a bench and so did not have to change the setup until the third shot. For all the shots, I used my hand and not the hand of the character that would be doing it. This may create slight continuity problems so I may have to consider reshoots if my arm looks drastically different to the actor's arms in the other shots. I used a strong lamp light behind the camera to brighten up the shot. I tried using a more direct torch but found that it was too powerful and caused a glare in the shot.
I found that shot DS18 was at first difficult to setup to get the gun and the badge to stay upright but not fall on each other as I had to pick the gun up without the badge falling over. I shot 2 takes to be assured that I had the shots that I wanted and found that I was eventually able to support the 2 props up against the bench without falling over throughout the shot. I did a trial of the shot beforehand to ensure that it would work before I started filming.
I found that shot DS8 looked odd in the viewfinder on the camera as the ridges of the circle were 'popping' whilst filming. After looking at the footage, I found that this problem was not visible.
I found that DS18 was very easy and the only problem was that the piece of paper did not look like a booklet being pushed forward. To combat this, I added a sketch book below the piece of paper which made it more convincing. I had the angle the camera downwards on the tripod and was concerned that the angle was too extreme but instead am comfortable with how the shot turned out.
DS18
I found that shot DS18 was at first difficult to setup to get the gun and the badge to stay upright but not fall on each other as I had to pick the gun up without the badge falling over. I shot 2 takes to be assured that I had the shots that I wanted and found that I was eventually able to support the 2 props up against the bench without falling over throughout the shot. I did a trial of the shot beforehand to ensure that it would work before I started filming.
DS8
I found that shot DS8 looked odd in the viewfinder on the camera as the ridges of the circle were 'popping' whilst filming. After looking at the footage, I found that this problem was not visible.
DS11
I found that DS18 was very easy and the only problem was that the piece of paper did not look like a booklet being pushed forward. To combat this, I added a sketch book below the piece of paper which made it more convincing. I had the angle the camera downwards on the tripod and was concerned that the angle was too extreme but instead am comfortable with how the shot turned out.
Actors and character elements for film opening
Actors and character elements for film opening
I have found a volunteer actor who is willing to star as the police officer in my film opening. This actor will do most of the acting in the opening. As well as this, I will be using a female child actor for the innocent who is accidentally killed by the officer. Additionally, I will use a female adult for the wife of the man who is a victim of his domestic abuse.
Below is evidence that I have organised my actor through email (censored for privacy reasons)
In terms of how the character of the officer should be presented by the actor, I have created a Slideshare to list the character elements about the characterBelow is evidence that I have organised my actor through email (censored for privacy reasons)
Below is a Spicynodes used to show how I would like the audience to respond to each character element
Considering representing Disability in film opening
Considering representing Disability in film opening
After coming to the end of planning my film opening, I have considered using disability in my film opening as a means of showing the worsening state of the officer's mental ability. Before deciding to do this, I will choose to do some out of place and last minute research about how disability is represented in media. I have chosen to not use an extract from a piece of media that is the genre of Thriller as there are few examples that do not give a clear example of how disability is exactly represented. Instead, I would like to look at an extract from the TV show "Glee" and how disability is represented for the character of Artie who is bound to a wheelchair.
The link to this extract is:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKxyZYeEO_4
The link to this analysis on Slideshare is:
After analysing this extract, I have come to the conclusion that I will not represent disability directly in my film opening. Some inference of mental disability could be taken from the officer’s decline in mental state. I have chosen to do this because I feel that disability like being wheelchair bound would make the profession of a officer working in the street seem unrealistic and would not fit into the actions of the character. I will however, consider representing disability in my A2 music video project after realising the strong connotations that can be made from including disability in a piece of media.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKxyZYeEO_4
The link to this analysis on Slideshare is:
After analysing this extract, I have come to the conclusion that I will not represent disability directly in my film opening. Some inference of mental disability could be taken from the officer’s decline in mental state. I have chosen to do this because I feel that disability like being wheelchair bound would make the profession of a officer working in the street seem unrealistic and would not fit into the actions of the character. I will however, consider representing disability in my A2 music video project after realising the strong connotations that can be made from including disability in a piece of media.
Storyboard for film opening
Storyboard for film opening
Below is the storyboard for my film opening broken up into scenes: B, C, D Intro and D Song. Scene A's actual storyboard has not been included as that is only dialogue over matching text and so does not require a storyboard but does have a shot reference page for each line.Total number of shots (using storyboard)= 45 shots
Total length time (using storyboard)= 85 3/4 sec= 1 min 15 3/4 sec
Real estimate of total number of shots= 48-50
Real estimate of total time (Considering addition of Scene A and other shots)= 110 sec= 1min 50 sec
Editing for film opening
Editing for film opening
In my film opening, I will not use many effects due to me wanting to make the opening seem as realistic as possible and feel that the implementation of some effects may detract from this feeling. I will be relying quite heavily on practical effects where I am actually filming with real props like using an actual car for shots in scene B. A lot of shots will have inferred effects like the addition of sound effects like a gunshot sound without showing the muzzle flash. Most shots will only have been cut and not had many extra effects added to them. However, I will add some color effects to brighten and darken certain shots.
I will include standard cuts in my opening that are done in chronological order with continuity editing. This will help to show the order of events in a clear and logical manner as the shots are of the audience looking onto the character and not taken from the perspective of the character. I that was done instead, the who events would be presented in a different order due to him experiencing this downfall and so is unable to properly keep track of which events happened when.
I will include standard cuts in my opening that are done in chronological order with continuity editing. This will help to show the order of events in a clear and logical manner as the shots are of the audience looking onto the character and not taken from the perspective of the character. I that was done instead, the who events would be presented in a different order due to him experiencing this downfall and so is unable to properly keep track of which events happened when.
Shooting schedule for film opening
Shooting schedule for film opening
Here is a list of all the dates that I will be filming. A more in depth plan can be found on each filing report for each date that I filmed on.
- 11th November 2015
- 22th November
- 24th November
- 25 November
- 6th December
- 8th December
- 9th December
- 17th December
Filming locations for film opening
Filming locations for film opening
For my film opening, my set will be the exterior and interior of my home. Both of these locations allow for me to use lighting appropriately and also have a strong Thriller 'feeling' with the vast and ominous feeling in the exterior location and the dark and recessive feeling in the interior location.
Scene B and C will mostly be shot at this location which are the shots where the officer gets the dispatched from the 911 call and him on scene looking for the shooter and killing the child. Although these different scenes are set in different locations, I am shooting in the same area and location but will use trick photography to make them appear like different locations. I will film against the building itself for scene C but will film around the brick wall area for scene B.
Here is the interior dining room used for some of the interior shots of the song like of the gun and badge, the drinking, taking drugs and the shot of the family division page.Scene B and C will mostly be shot at this location which are the shots where the officer gets the dispatched from the 911 call and him on scene looking for the shooter and killing the child. Although these different scenes are set in different locations, I am shooting in the same area and location but will use trick photography to make them appear like different locations. I will film against the building itself for scene C but will film around the brick wall area for scene B.
Tuesday, 10 November 2015
Music/sound for film opening
Music/sound for film opening
For music in my film opening, I am using the song "Great Day Today". I decided to use a remixed version of the song and edit the song down myself to cut out the opening to the song and some of the middle lyrics to shorten down the song.
Here is the link for the original remixed version of "Great Day Today": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AmoPrwIgoy8
For the song used in the film opening, I will be using this edited version of the song:
During scene D, only the music will be able to be heard. However, during the other scenes; there will be diegetic sound present.
Here is the link for the original remixed version of "Great Day Today": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AmoPrwIgoy8
For the song used in the film opening, I will be using this edited version of the song:
The reason I chose to use this song is because of the cryptic lyrics that have strong metaphorical meaning which is common in Thrillers as films of that genre use vagueness and hidden meanings as a way of telling the story. The accompanying and matching use in this song helps to emphasise the genre of Thriller in this opening. The deep base of the singer in the lyrics also helps to show the officer's downfall in this opening by not using uplifting and positive sounding lyrics. The beat of the song and accompanying use of instruments also help to show the fast speed of this downfall that is not too fast but definitely allows time to show the sped of this character's development.
From a filming standpoint, each line of the lyrics allows for a single shot each which means that I will not be cutting between shots too often (with each shot during the song averaging around 2-3 seconds) but will cut enough to show the fast development of the character without me having to film a vast amount of shots.
I did not use the original version of the song and instead chose the remixed version because the original does not have any distinct elements of the genre of Thriller.
The reason that I have cut the song down from the original remixed version (2:54) down to a shorter version (1:19) is mainly because I would like to build the narrative before using this song with other scenes and so that would not be possible if using the original remixed song. I also did this because I felt that some of the lyrics failed to present the Thriller of genre so I kept the lyrics that did do this. I may cut this shorter version down again depending on the real length of the other scenes and how the fit together to create this penning. If I did cut the song down, I will most likely cut out the opening (or at least shorten it) as I feel that it is quite long and that I do not have the shots to fill the full 20 seconds.
Below is proof that I emailed Domino Records requesting to use the remixed version of "Great Day Today"
During scene D, only the music will be able to be heard. However, during the other scenes; there will be diegetic sound present.
Costume/props and hidden secrets for film opening
Costumes/props for film opening
For the props in my film opening, I have a hard rubber training handgun that will act as the police officer's weapon that he will use to mistakenly use to shoot a child. This will also serve as this character's inspiration for his domestic violence. Another prop is the officer's police badge that adds authority to the character and stands as a sign that he is a respected member of the community.Another prop is the police badge which represents this officer's authority and power that has been given to him as he acts as a public servant to defend and help people. This also acts as a memory of his past and shows how much he has fallen from this turn of events and downfall after killing this innocent.
For the costumes in my film opening, I have a tactical vest that the officer will wear when responding to the call about the shooting. This vest holds important police equipment like a radio and allows him to be recognized as a police officer. This vest also shows his preparation for a shootout as the officer is wearing a tactical vest which is designed for such events.
For my 'easter eggs' or hidden secrets, I had a poster that would have been on the wall in Scene C. This poster reads "Look for the light"which is a reference to the video game 'The Last of Us' where this line is part of the slogan for the anti-government group 'The Fireflies'. This line matches and fits this opening perfectly as it is a warning to the police officer about what will happen and that he should look for a way to prevent this downfall from happening. As he walks past and ignores this warning (as he is more focused on responding to this 911 call) he destines himself for what will happen. Sadly, I was unable to use this prop in my film opening as I had to cut out the shot where this poster was present as the take was too long and messed up the pacing of the scene that needed a greater sense of urgency.
I also used the prop of a coffee cup used by the officer to show his boredom and he stands leaning against his car waiting to be called out to respond to a situation. This prop changed to a beer bottle later on in the film opening to show the development in the officer's downfall from coffee to alcohol.
Another prop that I used was cigarettes. I considered using real cigarettes but decided against it based on the high cost/danger of doing so and for moral reasons of not wanting to support the tobacco industry. Instead, I sourced some fake cigarettes off of the internet and used them instead to show the development of poor choices made by the officer that is a part of his eventual downfall.
To show the audience what has happened and to give them greater context as to why the officer's downfall begins, I created a front page to a newspaper using a newspaper generator website online. Here is a link to the website that I used http://www.fodey.com/generators/newspaper/snippet.asp
Below is the contents of the front page that I entered in on the website (the rest of the article was automatically filled with other pieces of writing in the other columns)
"An unidentified officer of the LAPD shot and killed an 8 year old girl this last Monday after responding to reports of shooting at an undisclosed household in the LA area. The officer was freed from police custody and is currently under review based on their actions. The call that the officer was responding to was reports of shooting and a suspected home invasion that led to this officer responding to the call and subsequently shooting an 8 year old girl. Police have refused to release the 911 calls made by victims of this situation as well as refusing to release body cam footage of the officer. The officer was described as "unstable" and is suspected by many to still be dangerous. The 8 year old girl's parents released a post on social media regarding this event as a "tragedy" and that this officer "should face the death penalty for their actions"."
The title of the newspaper is: The Daily LA Times
The title of this article is: Killer Cop Slaughters Young Girl of 8
The original intended date on the newspaper was Friday, October 15, 1999. However, this was not possible as the website did not allow for the date to be changed. The reason that I choose this date was because it was the release date of the 1999 film 'Fight Club' who's genre matched my products genre of Thriller and acted as an 'easter egg' in my product. Instead, I used the name Tyler Durden as the author who is a character in the film 'Fight Club'.
Friday, 6 November 2015
Script and screenplay for film opening
Script for film opening
Below is the Prezi for my screenplay and script for my film opening, I have presented it in this way so that the order of events are clearer to the reader
Below is a Spicynodes used to summarise what happens in each scene
Media timetable
Below is a timetable for the dates that I will keep to finish this project. I have used these dates as I feel confident that I will be able to meet them and may even excel them and be more efficient than I expected. Please note: some posts may be uploaded on dates that do not coincide with the dates below based on the fact that the post had been completed but not uploaded on the date it was completed and kept as a draft until it was uploaded.
Date
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Task
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Notes
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Friday 30th October 2015
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Screenplay fully completed
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Done on time
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Friday 6th November 2015
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Storyboarded fully completed
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Done on time
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Friday 13th November 2015
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Confirmed actor agreement, locations and props
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Done on time
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Friday 13th November 2015
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Planning finished (final date)
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Finished on 11th November 2015(early)
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Friday 13th November 2015
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Start filming film opening
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Started on 11th November 2015 (early)
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Thursday 17th December 2015
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Finished filming and completed necessary reshoots (final date) and started editing
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Done on time
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Friday
1st January 2016 |
Film opening finished (edited)
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Done on time (uploaded on blog on 7th January 2016)
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Film synopsis and overview of film opening
Film synopsis, overview of film opening and thoughts about the opening
I will now begin planning my film opening. After having researched the genre of Thriller, I am confident that I would like my film opening to be the genre of Thriller.
In this opening, the events will occur in chronological order and will start with a 911 call with a woman reporting a shooting. The woman who is on the phone reports that everybody has been shot and that she is wounded. The woman then drops the phone (indicating her death). Then the opening will feature a police officer who receives the dispatch call and then leaves to respond to the shooting. Then the officer arrives on scene. He finds clues to the shooting and then sees a shadow pass in front of him. Thinking it is the shooter, he shoots at the shadow but then realises that he has killed an innocent instead. Then the song "Great Day Today" begins to play and a sort of montage begins which shows the officer's downfall into drinking, drugs and violence. The end of the opening wraps up this downfall by the end of the song.
If I were to continue the film past the opening, I would probably have the rest of the film be a sort of "on the run" film where the ex-officer is being chased by the police and has to uncover who the shooter was that caused his downfall. As many Thrillers feature a twist by the end of the film, I would probably have a twist in this film that shows that the officer was actually the shooter with multiple personality disorder and that he started shooting. Then, he responded to the call of the shooting as a police officer where he is looking for himself to stop.
In my opening, the message that I would like to convey is the weak nature of this character and how his mistake led to the breakdown of his emotions which made him violent and as bad as the criminals that he made a vow to stop. This weak nature element is quite obviously subverting the stereotype of male behaviour when looked at from a wide view. However, the representation of this character in the opening will show him as quite strong in his actions in this chaotic situation that is occurring around him and that he is not actually physically weak, but is mentally so. This representation is enforcing the stereotype of males when immediately viewed and will take an analysis by the viewer to fully understand how this character is in fact weak.
I am using a male actor based on availability but almost did use a female actress to film. This mental approach of mine was open to using either gender to film with and so I feel that my representation of this character is not affected by which actor I worked with and that no element of sexism was present in this decision.
I feel that my approach to domestic abuse, drug abuse, innocent people killed and general violence is being done appropriately and that these elements are not represented as positive things and instead things that bring negative events and situations into a person's life.
Tuesday, 3 November 2015
Titles ordering in Thrillers
The order of titles in the opening of Thrillers
The openings of films contain titles. These titles introduce the main contributors that allowed the film to be made like the director, producer and key actors. Thrillers often do not deviate from other films and also contain titles. Often these credits are placed over moving images that often relate to the film but are not important enough to be shown just on their own.Titles in the opening of Thrills may also credit the book that they are based on and the author that wrote the book.
An example of titles in the opening of a Thriller is 1999's 'Fight
Club' where the opening titles are shown over a path of the protagonist's 'fear
center'. These images move through various cerebral micro-landscapes and exit a
skin pore with credits on each different shot. Then these titles conclude with
a Smith & Wesson 4506 pointed into the protagonist's mouth which links to
the fear center images.
Another opening is the opening to 1995's Seven where the opening titles are shown over the antagonist's crafty and meticulous hands as he writes in his diary, crafts different things together with scissors and clips and as he cuts off the end of his fingers to get rid of his fingerprints.
Story/plot in Thrillers
The story/plot in Thrillers
These are often murder or criminal story lines that involve the uncovering of a crime or a mystery. Often, more complex plots are used to mislead the audience with clues and pieces of evidence that do not always make immediate sense. This builds suspense for the audience as they are filled with uncertainty and confusion about some of the plot and feel that they need to concentrate more. Then, shocking plot twists are used as a way of keeping the audience engaged and often occurs nearer the end of the film. This keeps the audience in even more suspense as they are unsure about what is going to happen next. The plot also often involves a lot of action and fast paced chaos as a means of disorienting the audience and keeping them in this spiral of confusion about what developments will happen in the story.
Thrillers also contain a lot of movies about identity such as having characters who find out that their real identity is that of one that they were unaware of at the start of the film. This can be seen in movies like 1999's Fight Club where the Narrator finds out that he is in fact Tyler Durden and created this alter ego to experience a more fulfilling lifestyle that is filled with chaotic behaviour.
Another example of this is in Shutter island where Edward Daniels finds out that he is actually Andrew Laeddis. He is told that he is the hospital's most dangerous patient and Dr. John Cawley proves this by showing how his name is an anagram of the man who killed his wife which he created to hide from the truth that he is responsible for her death..
Other storylines include the revelation of events where the character finds out a major fact that alters the plot. This can be seen in movies like 1999's Sixth Sense where Dr. Malcolm Crowe finds out that he has been dead throughout most of the film and was killed near the beginning of the film by Vincent Grey (one of his former patients).
Thrillers may also be in the form of superhero movies that contain Thriller elements. This is shown in the Dark Knight with some aspects of the film such as when James Gordon and Batman are racing to save Harvey Dent and Rachel Dawes. Another example is the chase scene between the Joker and the police where the Joker is going after Harvey Dent after he falsely admits that he is the Batman and the way that Batman involves himself in the chase to save Harvey Dent from the Joker.
Thrillers also contain a lot of movies about identity such as having characters who find out that their real identity is that of one that they were unaware of at the start of the film. This can be seen in movies like 1999's Fight Club where the Narrator finds out that he is in fact Tyler Durden and created this alter ego to experience a more fulfilling lifestyle that is filled with chaotic behaviour.
Another example of this is in Shutter island where Edward Daniels finds out that he is actually Andrew Laeddis. He is told that he is the hospital's most dangerous patient and Dr. John Cawley proves this by showing how his name is an anagram of the man who killed his wife which he created to hide from the truth that he is responsible for her death..
Other storylines include the revelation of events where the character finds out a major fact that alters the plot. This can be seen in movies like 1999's Sixth Sense where Dr. Malcolm Crowe finds out that he has been dead throughout most of the film and was killed near the beginning of the film by Vincent Grey (one of his former patients).
Thrillers may also be in the form of superhero movies that contain Thriller elements. This is shown in the Dark Knight with some aspects of the film such as when James Gordon and Batman are racing to save Harvey Dent and Rachel Dawes. Another example is the chase scene between the Joker and the police where the Joker is going after Harvey Dent after he falsely admits that he is the Batman and the way that Batman involves himself in the chase to save Harvey Dent from the Joker.
Thriller movie specific narrative structures: Gone Girl
Thriller movie specific narrative structures: Gone Girl
The narrative structure of 2014's Gone Girl follows standard structure in its beginning with logical ordering of events and flashbacks to support what the narrator (Nick Dunne) is saying. However, this changes quite rapidly as it has a twist about a third of the way through that Amy Elliott-Dunne is actually alive and well after the start of the film pointing towards the conclusion that Amy was brutally killed and that the detectives and police should be looking for her body. This twist is revealed very early on and this breaks the norm of the twist in films as they often come at the ending.
The film also has many moments of overlap to show the same event from the different perspectives of two different characters and keeps the audience in time with time stamps on screen that tell them how long Amy has been missing for.
This unique narrative structure has quite a shocking impact on the audience as they are unsuspecting of the different changes in the plot that are abnormal and out of place in comparison to other Thrillers. The director (David Fincher) is famous for Thrillers and so knew that the audience would be expecting him to keep to his standard narrative format. This changed acted as a 'trick' to add a unique feeling to Gone Girl that could be easily identified as a film where Fincher choose to change the norm and take on a new structure in one of his films.
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